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Re: To Be Friend and Foe
I really enjoyed this. The imagery made me feel like I was in the poem, too. I also like how the mood at the beginning is stressed and tense, but ...
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Re: The Poisonous Apple
Thanks, I appreciae it :) But I just wanted to tell you I think you have me confused with someone else on here. This is the first poem I've posted ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Hi Everyone.
Thanks for all the welcomes! But Snoink, I love reading any type of fiction. I'm still working on writing fiction. And my favorite type of fiction is fantasy stuff, which ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: The Poisonous Apple
I'm new here and this is the first poem I'm going to post. I really need constructive criticism, so have at it. Thanks :D You were mysterious, full of pain ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Sorrow Filled Night
I really, really enjoyed this. From the first line I felt like I had been tugged into your poem, and it was me remembering my dark days.This was my favorite ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Poem: Not part of this world.
Hi there! I enjoyed this poem, but I also got the feeling that it was missing something. I especially liked it for the reason that I think most people can ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Hi Everyone.
Hello!I'm Relentless27. I've never done anything like this before and rarely show my work to friends and family, much less people I've never met. However, I've been reading other peoples ...
Aug 14, 2010
