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Relentless27

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To Be Friend and Foe

    I really enjoyed this. The imagery made me feel like I was in the poem, too. I also like how the mood at the beginning is stressed and tense, but ...

    Aug 15, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Poisonous Apple

    Thanks, I appreciae it :) But I just wanted to tell you I think you have me confused with someone else on here. This is the first poem I've posted ...

    Aug 15, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi Everyone.

    Thanks for all the welcomes! But Snoink, I love reading any type of fiction. I'm still working on writing fiction. And my favorite type of fiction is fantasy stuff, which ...

    Aug 15, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Poisonous Apple

    I'm new here and this is the first poem I'm going to post. I really need constructive criticism, so have at it. Thanks :D You were mysterious, full of pain ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sorrow Filled Night

    I really, really enjoyed this. From the first line I felt like I had been tugged into your poem, and it was me remembering my dark days.This was my favorite ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Poem: Not part of this world.

    Hi there! I enjoyed this poem, but I also got the feeling that it was missing something. I especially liked it for the reason that I think most people can ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi Everyone.

    Hello!I'm Relentless27. I've never done anything like this before and rarely show my work to friends and family, much less people I've never met. However, I've been reading other peoples ...

    Aug 14, 2010


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality