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Re: Prydwen Hall Chapter Two
Chapter Two The Guide Several hours later, the school was empty and silent. The amber light of evening flooded the rooms as Professor Loftiess lit the lamps in the Great ...
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Re: Prydwen Hall A novel I'm working on
This is broken up in to parts to make it easier to view. Chapter One Day of Arrival Streams of golden light shimmered through the arched windows of the Great ...
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Re: Prydwen Hall a novel
Thanks for the tip! I'll do that right away.
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Re: Monster.
I think your story is fascinating. I love how it begins and then ends with "I'm becoming a monster." Powerful stuff. Really well written. I can see this as a ...
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Re: Prydwen Hall a novel
Prydwen Hall Chapter One Day of Arrival Streams of golden light shimmered through the arched windows of the Great Hall, illuminating the royal blue gown of a peculiar old man ...
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Re: Child's Play Part One
I think your story is marvelous and is bursting with merit. But the beginning was very confusing for me. You should continue writing and consider sending your stories off to ...
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Re: Thomas the Rhymer
Thomas the Rhymer A wandering Harper, scorned and poor, He begged his bread from door to door; And turned to please a peasant's ear, The harp a king had loved ...
Aug 28, 2009
