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The Vampire Lestat is a parody, you just have to continue reading. He is being made fun of as being a whining, conceited, overly dramatic, larger-that-life character who is in ...

I just wanted to thank everyone for all your comments and suggestions. I sent the book off after fixing some of the problems everyone pointed out and am looking forward ...

Do you think you can review the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to send it off and I could use some feedback. Please help. topic52431.html Prydwen ...

Could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm going to be sending it out within the next week and hope to make it pitch perfect. ...

Could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to send it off and I'd appreciate it if you could offer any feedback. Please help. ...

Could you critique the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to send it off and I need to make it pitch perfect. Please help. topic52431.html

Could you please review my first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to mail it off and I'd like to perfect it before I do. I'd so appreciate ...

Please review my first chapter of my novel. I;m sending it off this week and would love to get it perfect. I'd so appreciate it if you could find the ...

Could you please review the first chapter of my novel. I'm sending it off this week and would like a critique before I do so that it's pitch perfect. I'd ...

Could you please review the first chapter of my book? I'm about to send it off and would like to have it critiqued before I do. I'd so appreciate it ...

This story is really fun, reminds me of "Ella Enchanted" and other stories like it. I especially love the way you introduced her future fiance: "there was a shadow being ...

Wow, this story is really exceptional. I love the line from Mimi about being addicted to centuries-old champagne found in Benjamin Franklin's cellar and the opium grown by nuns, etc. ...

I am Lestat, the Vampire. I am tragically immortal. For two hundred years I have been reclining deep in the belly of the earth, taking comfort in the solitude my ...

Henry Putter and the Stone of the Sorcerer Chapter One The Boy who Lived Mr. and Mrs. Dunsly of Number Four Drivel Drive were proud to say they were perfectly ...

I think it's really a great beginning. You've got a girl mesmerized by a handsome, seductive guy, she's seems to want to struggle against him, but can't. She is helpless ...