Reebz

Worth reading. :)

Ooh I get where you're coming from.. I'll edit it a little. Thank you so much for the advice everyone. :)

After going through your works, this doesn't really seem like you. Quite brief, but I'm sure that if you continue, you'll be able to put those writing skills to good ...

Woww. Breathtaking, like seriouslyy. :O Loved it. :D

.The sight of you sends my nerves running haywire, my helpless heart beating beyond it's control. When I look into your eyes, the way they sparkle and reflect the myriads ...

Youu actually made Death seem funny! Very well-written and incredibly unique idea. :)

It was kind of all over the place. Looks like you were quite emotional at the time - Maybe take it easy next time and go in proper sequence? It ...

It was kind of all over the place. Looks like you were quite emotional at the time - Maybe take it easy next time and go in proper sequence? It ...

You've got serious talent. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

You've got me wishing I had blue eyes! :D

Wow. Yes rather dark poetry, but don't change your style - It's unique and still reallyy goodd!

Style of writing is amazing.. Dramatic? Yes. But still intriguing.

He sits down there round the street corner, With his heart on his torn sleeve Eyes fixed on the same old girl, dedicating that same old song, First love ain't ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It's a little abrupt? But you should play with rhyming words like that more often, you've surely got the knack for it. :)

Very deep. Thoroughly enjoyed it. :)