Reebz

You portrayed the ballerina as an incredibly elegant dancer and it seems like you've effortlessly written a really good poem. :)

This will probably be listed as quite a useless review.. But anyhow, I completely agree! Being a Scottish-bred Pakistani, I hadn't realized how important our ancestor's homeland can really be. ...

Well there's been enough critique ^ I enjoyed it, keep writing!

Awh, this is what I think of music too. ^.^ Keep writing and I'm sure you'll improve even further. :)

Peas?! Haha. Loved it, honestly. :D

Putting the spelling errors aside, really loved it. :D

Wow. Writing technique is amazing. Thoroughly enjoyed reading. :)

Quite a mood-changing poem. But considering you wrote it on the spot, it was well-written. :)

Ever thought of life coaching? Haha. :P Although I amn't the suicidal kind, this'd definitely make me think twice before doing something drastic. Amazing.

Beautifully written. And I agree completely. :D

Stumbling hopelessly towards the car, barely tall enough to reach, she taps With a look of disgust, the man rolls up his window turning to look away without so much ...

I go through this everyday - so I can relate completely. Well-written. :)

A tad short but really good. Enjoyed reading it. :)

It's really good, keep rhyming. ;)

My favourite thing about this piece? The description. You made the images so vivid and clear in my mind that it was extremely enjoyable to read. Keep us this sort ...