Redneck

Have any of you ever written from the point of view of a drug addict? Do you think its possible to write this sort of thing well without any sort ...

This. Is. Hilarious. You kept me laughing the entire time, and that's not an easy feat ;3 I don't have any critiques, though, because what kind of person would want ...

Overall, it was a good story, though I have a few nitpicks. Your sentences can be a bit short and choppy, I think you should try to make them flow ...

I can't really see anything here that needs improving! My eyes were glued to the screen the whole time I was reading it, and you left me wanting more. This ...