RedSmiles

Hello Dream Writer! I see you joined YWS yesterday, I'm new as well :) This poem is cute! You describe your thoughts and feelings well and with grace. I agree ...

Emotions, caterpillars metamorphing, ever so slightly always changing. Can't help but let them fly, and as they change let myself cry. - I'm never going to let it all go, ...

Wow! I love the dramatic use of sentence fragments and the plethora of metaphors! This short story definitely leaves the reader yearning for more. You're idea here is amazing and ...

I love the beach pictures! I feel like the snap shot of the seagull could have an amazing and dramatic effect if you made it black and white and adjusted ...

Short, simple, and good. Especially at 11 yrs old! I feel like the use of punctuation distracts from the verb-age. Try counting syllables, if you parallel the syllables in your ...

I am but the remaining pulp of a beaten, abused, abandoned, starving girl. This house is dark and it smells of dust and dogs. The amber, square inch tiles are ...