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My soul is like a well, an anchor is my love. Tears are wells of despair in my own well of soul . This line confuses me! These wells tear; ...

Hey Chisel, thanks for the review! I thought you might like my stories because all the one's I've posted so far have been sad. Snoink- I adore that you have ...

Hi Jennafina! If I was afraid of negative feedback I shouldn't post my stories to be reviewed. You're not mean, you're honest about how you feel, and I appreciate that. ...

You can read an update version of this at It's now a piece in a novel I'm writing. It’s against the rules. But, Dad has to be home for rules ...

Did you pluck this straight out of your journal? The whole piece makes me feel like you hate people, and the word 'we' means you're including yourself. You seem angry. ...

Although this is a very poetic paragraph, and I like the piece, I don't feel like it's a poem. Maybe it would better fit in the 'Narrative Poetry' Forum? Or ...

Hi Elinor! The short stories have already been posted, they're in the 'Other Fiction' forum. I'd be excited to get a review from you! I was born writing. From silly ...

Hmmm, I didn't really pick a rhyme scheme, I just wrote it as it flowed, and now looking over it I'm not sure I want to edit that. If I'm ...

I'm not sure how to help this first sentence, but it does seem weird. It would help a little to take out 'themselves' It was a heavy beating, but not ...

Reading this piece was tons of fun and slightly touching. I understand that his tendencies to really stink with words is probably due to his mental disorder, imprisonment, and possibly ...

Hey, here is some comedy work from me. Chapter One. She sat in a dark room. She laughed as she watched the television. a dark room, laughing as she watched.. ...

Hi there flit! I don't understand why stanza's don't separate when we post, but I've learned to add a dash between them to show their separation. I really love your ...

I love your mind :)And I think this piece colors a dreamy picture for readers. I do have a few suggestions! The small waves brush against the dock. The seagulls ...

Awww, thanks you guys! It's dandy to meet all of you as well. I am working on a series of short stories right now. I've posted two of them, both ...

Thank you! I truly love your suggestions, and have edited my draft. If you would like, I posted a short story about this same character a few days ago, and ...