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Aw! Thanks Jasminebells! I'm so glad you liked it, and when you have more time, I'd love to get a review from you!

This is the second half of chapter 2 in the novel I'm working on. I post it in segments because I know it's long and long pieces don't get many ...

Captain classy! : My thirteen year old IS very smart, she's even in a 'gifted and talented educational resources program'. She's going through her roughest times yet, her mom left ...

So this interesting thing about this poem is that it's supposed to be a piece found in a dramatic 13 year old girls diary in a novel I'm writing. I ...

When I cry I shed more blood than tears, when I'm scared I show more anger than fears. But by your side I show more love, than anything I've listed ...

I have goosebumps. You're my hero for having the courage to write down step by step how it happened, and admitting the parts that I know make you feel undeserved ...

Tell me what you think. (This is my first poem, hope you like it) :D. Wind whips at my hair through the open bus window, Creating a witch-like pose around ...

Elope is running away to get married rather than having a wedding. Thanks Mo!

I attempted to quote this and make suggestions in bold, but it didn't work becuase I had no suggestions. Iy was perfect. I loved the alliteration, sometime it annoys me ...

Thanks you guys! I'm so glad you like it! If you want more go to Dakota's Diary Chapter 2 part 1, it needs reviews badly. Even if you like it, ...

Two broad-shouldered, disfigured men stomped though an old log cabin, weapons hanging off their belts and in their muscular hands. A petite young woman stood inside the house, ready for ...

Hey Leeanna! Thanks SO much for the review, I'm glad you liked it. I'm very glad you took time to read it, I know it's long. Please, if you have ...

Hello Eddie! Great job here, but I'm rather biased. This if one of my favorite forms of poetry. I enjoy poetry that shows us something the writer feels, but still ...

Upon our first touch of lips, all the doubts stowed in my mind, your skin confined to my finger's tips, but still my doubts to hide behind. - As I ...

Your welcome :) Please send me a pm when you get it on utube! I'd love to see it come alive. I see you haven't received many reviews, I haven't ...