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"Dakota's Diary" is a novel I'm working on that contains diary entries from the main character's childhood. This entry is from chapter three, which is not yet complete. Dakota is ...

I feel very compelled to write a review after reading this. This hits very close to home for me in two ways. Number one, I've been in the main character's ...

Hey there! If you'd like, I'd love to have you review my story! It's Romantic Fiction and was recently moved to novels, though I've split it up into short stories ...

Hey guys I'm dying to get more reviews on this since it's been edited. I'm resisting the urge to repost it, but I want to know if the added details ...

Just wanted to stop by and see how your short story was coming along. I must say you've done a good job strenthening you story with this last edit. Still ...

Oh, anytime! Welcome to YWS by the way, I see your new. You're not used to writing in Enlglish? Where are you from? -Carly

“Isabelle! If you don’t get downstairs this instant, I’ll be late again!” Mom’s voice floats up the stairwell. Judging by the explanation point and what she's saying I think 'floats' ...

I'm not a guy but I have read your story, and didn't want to move on before letting you know what I think. I don't think you did a bad ...

Thank you, Lava! I appreciate your input, and I'm working on another edit now. -Carly

This sounds like an amazing idea, but here it is so confusing. You have a lot going on in this one paragraph and it's all jumbled together awkwardly. There's a ...

That! Was hilarious! I'm in hysterics right now; my family probably thinks I've lost my marbles. Well done. I think you should expand this for the rest of the family. ...

Hey Jordan! Welcome back :) Today is my first visit since January, life can be so crazy and busy. Are you hoping to post any new writing? -Carly

This is the first page of the first chapter in a novel I'm writing. It's fictional but all based on a true story. I appreciate all opinions! My wedding was ...

Eight-pointed, satin star that longing tourists depict. Eight directions to voyage before falling onto the bended knees on the maiden snow and silently pray to God, thanking him that there ...

Wow! thanks so much! I've missed seeing you around :) There's actually an updated version of this posted now "Dakota's Diary Chapter 2" there's parts one and two because it ...