RedEyedRunt

I have revised my character Jackie, she was a young teenager when she was kidnapped by the joker finding out that he was her father. Her gave her scars and ...

Summer: I looked at the strange man, I had many questions, but this man seemed quite agitated, so I just said, "Hi, my name's Summer."

"Yeah, I thought that too." I held out my hand, "My name's Jackie, what's yours?"

I looked at them, and nodded, "Ok." I heard my phone ring: A strange voice spoke into the phone: "Hello Jackie, I'll be there in 10 minutes, I placed one ...

"Thank you, What's your phone number? Just in case he comes, and I need someone to walk me through on what to do." I start to grab my purse and ...

I look at the mermen, my mouth was wide open in shock, then, after a second, I pulled myself together and nodded politely. "That would be amazing. Thank you. I ...

When I heard someone utter the word joker, I spun around in fright. I started to stutter, "Yes." I started to stutter again, "He's after me . . ." They ...

"Everyone else doesn't care, they don't like to chat with strangers these days. But you guys actually talked to me for once." Then, I paused, "I doubt you know who ...

"I somewhat like the rain. It feels really good, but where I live, it doesn't rain much." The compulsive lying had to stop, but I had to cover myself up. ...

I look at the boys in confusion. I shook his hand back, "My name's Jackie, nice to meet you." Boy the heat in here was hot, I wiped a piece ...

Jackie: I run to the bathroom to reapply my makeup, still covering my mouth with the napkins. I notice a strange boy, I shrug, and reapply my makeup, to cover ...

"I don't know, I live right across the street, and I saw a fire, I wish I had the guts to help . . ." I start to cry . ...

I stared at her tears in my eyes. "I honestly don't know what I am doing here, I just heard about a fire and came here as fast as possible ...

I heard a faint voice, i turned my head, it was a another girl, "Are you talking to me?"

Jackie I slowly looked at my piece of paper, it read the address where I was supposed to go. I quickly ran across the street, and read the address, 88667 ...