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Well, they keep raising how many points it takes to post, so I just fit them in together, especially since they're dedicated to the same person, Christian. And yeah, that ...

Thank you, very much.

It's a bit of a hidden thing with the down into the sea. It's like the ship sinking, therefore being eternal at the bottom of the sea, together. Thank you ...

I like this poem, the only problem I have with it is the way you chose to section it. The lines end abruptly and start oddly.

Thanks! Her emotions come out a bit later. Right now she's in a numb stage, still unable to fully accept that her mother is truly gone. I believe in the ...

Thank you very much! And yes, I know about the rain part. I did it on purpose. It's what she's trying to think about, in an attempt to focus on ...

Thank you very much, Dynasty.

So they say!

Thank you so much, Kit.

Thank you so much! I've been placed in Two Rivers in Raytown 5 times and it hasn't helped.. They keep sending me back and don't seem to get that it's ...

Thanks! I really appreciate your feed back. It helps me a lot. Sorry about my mistakes, I am a bit rusy.. I gave up on writing for awhile. Trying to ...

Thanks! I'll be getting into it more as the chapters go on. I keep in as little detail as possible at first.. But basically it was supposed to hint why ...

Thanks! It wasn't really meant to be a true pull-you in story.. More of a cause/effect story.. Showing some of the pain in every day life.. A glimpse into not ...

Thanks! I avoided being too descriptive in my short-story because I prefer to leave it to the imagination. My chapter stories are completely different, however. Thank you for the review. ...

I like it... It's VERY pretty. You could work on making it a bit more catchy, though. I mean, it's nice, but it's not something that will stick in my ...