RebellionLies

**UPDATE** This piece is currently in an indefinate hiatus. I am planning on revamping the piece all together before proceeding with chapter two (which, no, I have not begun, I ...

Thanks cooldude, you've been a big help. I've already began editing the whole piece with your tips. And Split-Second, as I mentioned earlier, paceing is one of the major things ...

Hi, Rebellionlies! I'm back again...I've taken a special liking to you. That just made me completely happy for some reason. :) And about the whole dialouge thing, I've managed to ...

I was reluctant to even choose to live with someone when going into college. I was lucky to decide for it in the end. The way you phrased that second ...

@ Everyone: Sorry for the slight delay at getting back to you guys, I had a few things going on. The critique is appreciated, you guys didn't totally bash my ...

That's the circle of life, but I've never thought of it in such a perspective.

Very interesting, very original. When I read the first few lines I thought this wasn't going to be very good, but you really pulled it off. Just a little bit ...