RebellionLies

Hey, sorry it took a couple of days to get back to you guys, just had a few things going on. Thanks for the warm welcome and explaining how points ...

Overall, I enjoyed the piece. It has good potential and could use some work. The only thing I've caught that no one else has yet mentioned is for you to ...

I was reluctant to even choose to live with someone when going into college. I was lucky to decide for it in the end. The way you phrased that second ...

@ Everyone: Sorry for the slight delay at getting back to you guys, I had a few things going on. The critique is appreciated, you guys didn't totally bash my ...

Anything else? There's always more! Untitled It's science fiction and I'm looking for some unbiased critique. Thanks.

Edgar Allen Poe. Creepy, but amazing nonetheless. -Jared Poe really is great, I have his complete collection. Another one of my favorites is Robert Frost, he writes about themes in ...

That was pretty amazing, Edgar Allan Poe would destroy you for this. I could never write a poem so entertaining. You've injected happiness straight into my veins, I'm going off ...

That's the circle of life, but I've never thought of it in such a perspective.

Very interesting, very original. When I read the first few lines I thought this wasn't going to be very good, but you really pulled it off. Just a little bit ...

I enjoyed it, it's just my cup of tea, but... Just one thing that I could not stand was the "And yes," continuation. This may have been an alliteration, but ...

Hey, I'm RebellionLies if you haven't looked to the left yet. I've managed to submit a work without reading the rules and knowing to review two things before I submit ...

Author's note: This is my first time here, so it's nice to meet everyone. I write in my spare time (and by spare time I mean when I should be ...