RebellionLies

I've got Ender's Game on my bookshelf in my "to read" section. Read it now! (Or when you get the chance). It's definately in my top 5 favorite books, but ...

I'm going to have to pick this up sometime, I've read Ender's Game by Card and absolutely loved it (though the sequels were very disappointing in my opinion). I must ...

Pretty sure I have to start with a new word. Here we go. Strife

No, like so many other people have said before me, it can be used to reveal what a character is like.

Haha, this really caught my eye, I've never seen someones Welcome post rated "R," and I was disappointed to find nothing vulgar inside. Anyways, it looks like you've been flooded ...

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I would venture to guess that this is a very good piece of writing. That would be an accurate guess. I did enjoy it very much, and couldn't find anything ...

The boy stood in his room, gun in hand, trembling just slightly. Light from his windows were filtered through navy blue curtains, making the room appear as if it were ...

**UPDATE** This piece is currently in an indefinate hiatus. I am planning on revamping the piece all together before proceeding with chapter two (which, no, I have not begun, I ...

Thanks cooldude, you've been a big help. I've already began editing the whole piece with your tips. And Split-Second, as I mentioned earlier, paceing is one of the major things ...

Hi, Rebellionlies! I'm back again...I've taken a special liking to you. That just made me completely happy for some reason. :) And about the whole dialouge thing, I've managed to ...

It is an enjoyable poem, but the hard shifts were distracting, such as But it comes back Back again to bloom I am happy I know Perhaps you can divide ...

First off, are you a Modest Mouse fan? Anyways, I really enjoyed the story. The only thing I caught was... I didn't know. I was interested in the material, that ...

Your poem is nice, we've all been there and asked the same questions. I hope you handle it better than I do. But for a bit of critique, as springrain2693 ...

Nice to meet you Dally (your name reminds me of the Outsiders, if you ever read it). Yes, as others have aready explained, please do go over the rules. So, ...