RealWriter99

I liked it, maybe a liitle too short. There's definately a few more describing words than needed and it takes away the meaning of the poem. Good work, dream on!

Nicely done! You grammar isn't fab but the words truely speak for themself. I love how it's about your Mum too! It's a warm, comforting subject. 8/10

Thanks....I understand where you are coming from.

Lovely. Well composed and written. Interesting too, it flows well and is over all very good! 10/10

Thanks- Your very encouraghing, you understood what I was aiming for. Simple but very meaningful.

Yes it was written for school. We could only use a certain amount of words (I was one under!). And there was fifteen words we had to put in it. ...

Its great, has the right amount of wording for the characters but my only issue is that sometimes you write too much about too little. Example-feeling like life is weighing ...

This song is good and is about an important matter. It flows and sounds amazing (I sang it out loud to get the feel for it). It sounds like a ...

I liked this! Maybe a bit to long so it drags on. But good. Describing words were OKAYISH! 7/10 :D Hope this helped. WELL DONE!

I loved it! One of my favourite poems! It was easy to keep hooked on, well wriiten and had good describing words. The only thing was that it didn't rhyme ...

I loved it! One of my favourite poems! It was easy to keep hooked on, well wriiten and had good describing words. The only thing was that it didn't rhyme ...

I thought this story was good. The only thing I would say is it's a bit hard to stay interested in. I personally think its a bit of a tiresome ...

As Kylie opened her mouth to yawn she saw her parents come into her room. “We’ve got a huge surprise for you!” they told her. Kylie was so enthusiastic about ...

Thanks- I was aware of my grammar mistakes (I got my little sister to write it from my book into the computer and then I copied and pasted). It is ...

I think it was a lovely topic to write about and I hope it is something dear to your heart. But I agree with Angel- it seems like you forced ...