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Re: Eclipse: Chapter 10
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this series! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far!
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Weight
It's no problem! Thank you for giving me the link. It might take me a bit because I need to rewrite my review at least a little bit and add ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 3, Something's Not Quite Right
Thank you so much for your review! It has really made my day! I hope you enjoy the rest of what I've written as well!
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]
(Ok, so I accidentally did a browser refresh and created this exact copy of my review, which is something I was not aware could be done. I can't delete the ...
Aug 30, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 11
Thank you so much for pointing out my misspelling of Duel! I corrected it in every instance I noticed. I also changed the fact that Elric's name was mentioned before ...
Aug 11, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 7, Nightshade
I hadn't even noticed that first mistake you pointed out! Thank you so much for that. That's something I need to fix some time this month! I also should have ...
Aug 5, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 6, Campfire Stories
Thank you for pointing out that I need to describe the characters more often/remind the audience of their appearance. At first I tried avoiding it at all costs because I ...
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 5, Don't Think About it
I just want to say thank you for reviewing my chapters so far. It means a lot to me, really. I've just been busy, and a bit of a space-cadet, ...
Aug 3, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 1, The Awakening
Thank you so much for the review! You gave some good points about my writing style. There's some stuff I need to work on, and some edits I should expect ...
Jul 30, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 7, Nightshade
Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate your time! You've pointed out some writing techniques I could use to improve my writing, and I'm glad that you gave ...
Jul 29, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 3, Something's Not Quite Right
Thank you once again for your review! Oh yeah, the they-them thing. Other people have pointed it out when I showed them some of my fanfics. It's actually more to ...
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 2, Archway to a New World
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying this so far! Please, feel free to comment on any of my future works if you'd like. Review or not, people ...
Jun 28, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 2, Archway to a New World
Thank you so much for the review! Oh my god, I have no idea how you did it. I hate having to read and watch things out of order with ...
Jun 24, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 1, The Awakening
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. I'll address your compliment on the language diversity, and the misspelling of altar along with the verb tense. ...
Jun 16, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 1, The Awakening
Thank you for your insights. I hope you enjoyed reading it! Funnily enough, when I finished creating these characters, I realized how cliche they can be on paper. I personally ...
Jun 14, 2021
