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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Faith: Prologue

    Your decription of Courage is excellent, but I'm curious about what Faith looks like. You say she was more Beautiful than the Moon and mentioned that Courage worried about her ...

    Oct 17, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Faith: Introduction

    This is well written, but I agree with Seraph. It would be more interesting if the introduction were like a story being told by someone. The whole deal with the ...

    Oct 17, 2007


The magic is only in what books say, how they stitched the patches of the universe together into one garment for us.
— Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451