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Re: Challenge
The crisp chill of the air sent shivers down her spine as she stared at the pristine scene before her. Steely grey eyes roamed over every shimmering mound. No one ...
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: The Mythology of Yesterday and Today
but people just assumed they had not pleased the gods and they deserved their punishment. One of the most heavily used gods and goddesses has been the Greek deities. - ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Age Barriers
When it comes to reading/critiquing on this site, I never look at the author's age. I think it is irrelevent. If their work is posted they obviously want a good ...
Nov 30, 2007 -
Re: The offical YWS Chat Virtual Holidance!
This sounds like fun. If it happens I'll be there.
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: In The Midst of Chaos - Chapter 3
Silence had earned Markali another set of lashings. The smell of the blood covering his back and pooling on the cell floor around him was making him nauseous. The pain ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Hypothetically speaking, of course!
Yeah.. I agree with Adam. There is always something to critique, no matter how perfect the grammar and spelling.
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Rose Petals to the Wind
Reakeda watched the clock. She knew it was late. It was always best to keep the others on their toes and the best way to do that was to make ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Memoirs of a thief, chapter one *Flagged for deletion*
*growls* This may not be as good of a critique as it originally was. My computer closed the page on me and caused me to lose the entire crit so ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Horace the Dragon or Bartemius the Monkey?
*Votes Dragon without hesitation* Dragons rule.. that's all there is to say.
Nov 18, 2007 -
Re: Go
Go In memory of Isaac Wise It seems so long, But feels so close. What happened? Why'd you go? I miss you alot As I remember That moment Why'd you ...
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: Bonded
Vidian looked through his pouches as he prepared for the day to begin. He had to make sure he had everything he would need. One pouch containing his notebook and ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Bonded
Name: Vidian Sex: M Age: 14 Clan: Corone Bond status: Currently Unbonded, looking for partner. Appearance: Vidian stands exactly five feet tall. He has black hair that nearly reaches his ...
Nov 12, 2007 -
Re: Match Maker
Andy? I thought you wanted me with bbb? When will you make up your mind? Okay.. Andy it is then.. *turns her adoring eyes on Andy* But.. I'm afraid I ...
Nov 6, 2007 -
Re: Me
I wrote this about two years ago, near the beginning of one of the worst years of my life. Me You see a smile on my face Think I'm great.. ...
Nov 6, 2007 -
Re: Match Maker
Really... hmm I'll have to test that theory. Maybe we can double with you and Errant. :wink: Of Course.. then.. Rick and Loose would have to join us too..
Nov 6, 2007
