Reakeda

Loose! You're adorable! *huggles* ~Rea

The royal palace glowed from several hundred brass bowls of lit oil, and they burned red, gold, and white; the color was altered by chemists’ powder [s]in the mixture[/s], and ...

“You aren’t done! You have to finish or you won’t pass the test and you can’t join the club.” The voice was mocking, daring me to walk away. I heaved ...

While the problems pointed out are a possiblity, if the new members read the rules (which should be the first thing one does -before- joining a site), then they'll know ...

The commoners weren't allowed the oil and wood that the nearby vine farms provided, though many of them worked there. They cheated instead, taking the smaller sticks they were allowed ...

No Prince Charming When I think of you, I don’t think “fairy tale come true,” Because you are so much more than that. You aren’t my “Knight in shining armor,” ...

B y the time I caught my balance, we ended Slowly the line grew with more families behind us, but we slowly got closer to the buffet. - Using slowly ...

This was just enough to make me curious. I can't decide if I like what I've read or not, but the way you ended it was leaves me wanting more, ...

Rylan’s medical training immediately wondered how he had died, but without seeing any wound on his back it would be impossible to tell without turning the body over and examining ...

Eve would have normally suggested coffee, but everybody liked their coffee black, but they all liked their tea with something in it. - This sentence really bugs me. You used ...

*glances at her review count and winces slightly*... Yeah. I'll have to give a few more of those before then, but I like the idea.

What is it about love that makes it hide[s]s[/s] behind bushes, posed and ready to jump , to grab the first prey it sees? I would make "posed and ready ...

Blue lakes I see,as still as can be Is a n honour I cheerish,with the gift if sight Buffle rowmed, and the wolf did cry I'm sorry.. but who taught ...

I stumbled a bit as read this, but that might just be because I was trying to read it out loud without looking over it first. :P Over all, I ...

My first word of advice would be to post it in single spaced format, putting proper spacing between stanzas. Lose the format you used. It makes it a bit hard ...