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^^ I liked. James seems very cynical and I like that about him. I have to say it was more his character than any other that kept me reading, though ...

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Mom and I spent most of the say at the train station or on the train. - Just a typo here.. I think you meant "day", not "say". But Dad ...

Time: Day 1, 7:45 AM; Erion Sweat shown dark on his navy t-shirt as he ran through the kata in example again. “Move with me, Mark. Again.” The routine was ...

Full Name: Erion Demurl Gender: Male Age: 19 Birthplace: Bellefonte, Pennsylvania Job: Assistant Martial Arts Instructor (Daytime) Gas station Clerk (Night) Eyes: A sharp grey that seems to penetrate

Note: This is the beginning of a story that I intend on writing in a journal form. I am looking for opinions on the content as well as the format. ...

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A Gravestone Made of Wheat - Title of a book should be either italicized or underlined Will Weaver grew up on a dairy farm located in Minnesota. The sheriff said ...

shoved m e forward toward the bottles. Much better, Jabber. This actually manage to keep interest. It flowed rather nicely and the dialogue didn't throw me a bit. ^^ It ...

No one knew where the name came from, how it was thought up, why it was given to him, but it was appropriate, so it stuck. - I think this ...

I guess it is convenient in some ways but for other people that don't get on YWS every day, and only post there stories and reviews very little it will ...

Setting: A Research Lab in Sedrea on Seluza- the Sorences home planet. Tsormae Neshtac mumbled to himself as he carefully dropped a minute amount of his current project onto the ...

Silence rips the air as a sudden movement is caught by the eye of each person. A cough catches in someone’s chest causing a dull thudding sound. Whose turn is ...

NAME: Tsormae Neshtac RACE: Sorence AGE: 27 HEIGHT: Approximately 1.5 meters WEIGHT: Approximately 48 kilograms EYES: Gray HAIR: N/A PHYSIQUE: Tsormae Neshtac has a broken horizontal line pattern on h

Toshom groaned as the sunlight hit his eyelids. He winced and then blinked them open, as he looked around. He saw that they were still in the woods, in the ...