Razzker

I'll just give a quick review for this prologue. I agree with the reviewers above. Even though this is a prologue, a little more description about the setting around the ...

Hi there! I've not reviewed a poem before, so this is my first try. The colors are hidden Within the mind, But will it create them Or leave them behind? ...

Hi, blackbird! Here as requested. Interesting story. I really like your writing style! I'm not going to nitpick, since I actually let myself enjoy the story. :P Plot : 9/10 ...

A wonderfully enjoyable read! Plot : 10/10 What can I say? It's not cliched at all. It was wonderful -- it was gripping, emotionally-charged and overall very interesting. I loved ...

An interesting beginning. Although ... a teen court? Hmm. Plot : 7/10 The plot was mildly interesting. Your story could have been opened up a lot more interestingly than just ...

The story is quite good, but there were three major problems: punctuation, spelling and sentence structure. Plot : 8/10 The plot, story-wise, was quite interesting but it could definitely be ...

for one fairest in all the lands means she's beautiful.....have you ever heard of snow white?!? she's born to evil parents therefore she is obviously going to become evil in ...

Interesting concept and story! Plot : 8/10 So far, the plot was quite interesting and it definitely captured my attention. Characters : 6/10 Some of the characters were a bit ...

I've read the version before this one and I can clearly see the difference! This is much better than the other one. You've written a really good story there -- ...

I'll give this story a big review. I woke with a start, in a cold sweat; I realized I was shaking violently. After calming my self down I glanced at ...

Ah, a happy ending! This story has an interesting plot line, though resolved a little too swiftly. Plot : 8/10 The plot wasn't too cliched and it kept me reading. ...

This is so far an amazing story. It has some minor faults, but I'm not going to nit pick right now. In addition, I won't write a full review right ...

A mildly interesting story that is written quite well, detailing the actions and events in a relatively clear manner. Plot : 8/10 The plot was progressed well throughout the story. ...

This will be a review for both parts of this story. A very fun, enjoyable read. It touches on several emotional issues like pride, love, friendship. Plot : 9/10 The ...

A cute, heart-warming short story. Plot : 9/10 It was a very short story, but I understood the story well enough to enjoy such shortness! I like how the story's ...