Ray112

Just another rant, something random I came up with this morning. :D Though I am an avid supporter of the poetic arts, I could never be a critic. Just the ...

Yeah, I don't even know. I just started writing it this morning and I meant to put it on here as a rough draft and pressed the wrong button. :D ...

Moved

my question exactly. xD

Damian's Schedule A Day 8:00-9:00 - Astral projection-Mrs. Sutherland 9:00-10:00 - Emotion Reading101 - Ms. Towson 10:00-11:00 -Reading Auras 101-Ms. Towson 11:00-12:00 - Math-Mr. Sutherland 12:00-1:0

While so far away What could I really say? To make it up to you. Pretend that it's warm. Pretend we have faith. Separated by blue What can I say? ...

Okay well, I think what you've got here is pretty cool. In the the first two stanza's the poem's about how much the speaker wants to forget his/her lover. I'm ...

Okay I like where you're going here and this poem has some good points about it for example I don't know if you did this by accident or intended, but ...

With all respect to Truth's view, I didn't get this poem. But the use of imagery and description are the high points in it. A lot of people have trouble ...

Actually I think I get it. The each of the lines in the first stanza relate to the lines in the second stanza i.e. where it says searching the world ...

oh okay, I thought we were supposed to have prior experience in order to keep our abilities. So, can I keep the aurora ability in there? cause I was gonna ...

Name: Damian Hall Gender: Male Age (14): 14 Description: Personality: Damian is very social but he tends to come off as sarcastic and a know-it-all. Because of Damian's age adults ...

hey, still room for me to join?

Comeon! really? this seems like a good idea. I wanna try it. there should be more people.

this looks cool, i may join. xD