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Re: Hogwarts 2.0
i normally wouldn't try this but it looks like everything's slowed down because of the debate. But is it too late if i join? I'm on a break so I ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Avatar: Cycle Destroyed
Profile: Name: Taiji Takumi Age:16 Gender: male Personality:Taiji Takumi is a traveling musician. He's the kind of person who show's different aspects of himself when you least expect it. He's ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: The Kings Opal part one of chapter one
OKay, I liked this story so I'd figure i'd try dissecting it for ya. Those two before me pretty much chewed all the meat off this bone but i'll give ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: ATLAS
Hey thanks for your comments. A lot of these i did notice. Some of them i didn't. For example the way my story tends to jump from part to part. ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: ATLAS
author's note: I tried posting this awhile ago but i read through it didn't like it and revised it some more. lol But hopefully when you read through this you ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: The Returning One
I like this poem. It seems to tell a story. I can imagine the speaker trapped in a prison. I imagine that the prison's more figurative than tangent. Maybe the ...
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: The Prophecy of the Light
Umm, well hey Roy. I just want to say to start with that you have a good idea going right now,but the problem is that at the moment the story ...
Dec 25, 2007 -
Re: Lost planet Chapter one part one.The nest.
Chapter one: The nest. The tunnels were humid and dark; matching scenery for the feelings of self blame that weighed our hearts. Our escape had been by the skin of ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Atlas
Chapter two: Upload! Rowan Hunter was not surprised when he found himself on his way to the third level. He didn’t quite understand why he was taking the long ride ...
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: Atlas
Alright so this is my story i'll try to update it until Its finished before the contest is over because I don't plan for it to be a long one. ...
Dec 7, 2007
