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  • Archive Re: Grey Area

    Chris Bale~ It happened on a Wednesday. The sky was bright blue and the sun poked out through the fluffy white clouds. The lunch hour traffic had just picked up ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Archive Re: Grey Area

    -Name:Chris Bale -Age: 18 -Gender: male -Appearance: He's thin,lanky, and kinda short for his age. He has short black hair and dark brown eyes. -Personality:The nice guy type. People like ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Name: Devin Dedaux Age:14 Appearance: He's tall, skinny, and has long gangly arms. His hair is dyed black with red tips that he spiked so now it looks like flames. ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    ha ha okay i'll do the same.

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    I was gonna make a peridido beach character but i guess i'll make a coates. Or would you guys like to focus on the normal kids versus the mutated kids?

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    save a spot for me!=)

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Regret

    Everybody thanks for the advice.=) i liked all of the comments. Areida,I don't think I'll take the periods away because if I did it'd take away from the statement in ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Regret

    Hey! thanks for all of the comments. =) I appreciate the reviews.

    Apr 26, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Regret

    Regret. You are my sorrow. I wither. I'm torn. I'm written in my disaster but I do not see myself. You are the message beneath the curtain-- Yet I will ...

    Apr 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Let's talk about friends.

    Thanks, i'll try that. I'm working on a poetry piece as a present for a friend of mine's birthday. And I just want it to be something special ya know?

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Let's talk about friends.

    Let's talk about friends. There are no words that describe a good friend. There are no adjectives, no nouns--no action. For this type of thing there is no written translation-- ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Be mine (chapter 1)

    thanks for the comments. And yea i do have to fix the tense issues that's mostly because I wasn't sure if I wanted to be in past or present tense ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Be mine (chapter 1)

    This story doesn't have a name yet. It's sort of a love romance comedy. I've decided to do something a little different with the main character. You may like it ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Archive Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)

    no Forever was Will. I'm Edward. He's the one who saved your character from her brother remember? He teleports.

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Archive Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)

    what happened to this? This was fun. why'd it die?

    Feb 5, 2010


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn