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  • Archive Re: Grey Area

    Chris Bale~ It happened on a Wednesday. The sky was bright blue and the sun poked out through the fluffy white clouds. The lunch hour traffic had just picked up ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Archive Re: Grey Area

    -Name:Chris Bale -Age: 18 -Gender: male -Appearance: He's thin,lanky, and kinda short for his age. He has short black hair and dark brown eyes. -Personality:The nice guy type. People like ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Name: Devin Dedaux Age:14 Appearance: He's tall, skinny, and has long gangly arms. His hair is dyed black with red tips that he spiked so now it looks like flames. ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    ha ha okay i'll do the same.

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    I was gonna make a peridido beach character but i guess i'll make a coates. Or would you guys like to focus on the normal kids versus the mutated kids?

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    save a spot for me!=)

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Regret

    Everybody thanks for the advice.=) i liked all of the comments. Areida,I don't think I'll take the periods away because if I did it'd take away from the statement in ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Regret

    Hey! thanks for all of the comments. =) I appreciate the reviews.

    Apr 26, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Regret

    Regret. You are my sorrow. I wither. I'm torn. I'm written in my disaster but I do not see myself. You are the message beneath the curtain-- Yet I will ...

    Apr 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Let's talk about friends.

    Thanks, i'll try that. I'm working on a poetry piece as a present for a friend of mine's birthday. And I just want it to be something special ya know?

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Let's talk about friends.

    Let's talk about friends. There are no words that describe a good friend. There are no adjectives, no nouns--no action. For this type of thing there is no written translation-- ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Be mine (chapter 1)

    thanks for the comments. And yea i do have to fix the tense issues that's mostly because I wasn't sure if I wanted to be in past or present tense ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Be mine (chapter 1)

    This story doesn't have a name yet. It's sort of a love romance comedy. I've decided to do something a little different with the main character. You may like it ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Archive Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)

    no Forever was Will. I'm Edward. He's the one who saved your character from her brother remember? He teleports.

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Archive Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)

    what happened to this? This was fun. why'd it die?

    Feb 5, 2010


The adjective should reinvent the noun.
— Leslie Norris