Ray112

I know there's like tons of grammar Nazis here. Well, I suck at grammar. I'm in need of a good editor. :)

HI! I'd love it if you could review my book:) It's gonna be a series, and i'm just getting started working on a blog that will handle all of the ...

Hi! I posted this a little while ago. Could you review it for me? :)

these are the descriptions of the countries. AYMIR- You come from the city of Ayimeth(the silver city). Ayimeth was once frequently attacked by raiding villages that preyed on it's many ...

Username: ray112 Author/Penname: TheDude Title: "This is not the name of the story" Short Synopsis/Blurb: Eric Carter's life changes one day after excepting a call from his friend. Picture/s: don't ...

thankyou for the comments everyone. please comment on the other chapters too. I need all the feed back I can get. thank you.

Chapter Three “Applebees?” Sean blinked. “What?” “Sean, up until a few minutes ago, I thought you were dead. And you want to meet at Applebees?” I smirked. “Dude, that’s more ...

Let me tell ya something budd, one of the things I like best about your poems is they're short xD but kidding aside. They're to the point and really good. ...

I like this. It tells a story, but I think you should space the lines up a bit. Make the paragraphs less bunched, that way your poem will be easier ...

I like this. It narrates the inevitability of the human condition. All things from the earth return to the earth. We are just like Gold. We shine are hardest but ...

Chapter two By the time I got there the rain was pouring down hard. I parked right in the God damn front—med techs and nurses looking at me and everything—and ...

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Wow, that was different.I've never read a poem like this before. It was almost kinda creepy, like not saying that your creepy or anything just, it was so personal. Almost ...

Chapter one If you’re reading this right now… Stop. Shut off your computer, pour the coffee in the trash, And forget you ever clicked this forum NOW before it’s too ...