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  • Atlas

    Alright so this is my story i'll try to update it until Its finished before the contest is over because I don't plan for it to be a long one. ...

    11 min read
  • Lost planet Chapter one part one.The nest.

    Chapter one: The nest. The tunnels were humid and dark; matching scenery for the feelings of self blame that weighed our hearts. Our escape had been by the skin of ...

    7 min read
  • ATLAS

    author's note: I tried posting this awhile ago but i read through it didn't like it and revised it some more. lol But hopefully when you read through this you ...

    14 min read
  • I Am Geek!

    I Am Geeek I am a geek. I can apply the force to any situation- I’m prone to massive humiliation I Am geek! I subscribe to music magazine every week ...

    1 min read
  • I need you/Pornography.

    I need you Beautyful Goddess; evil temptress envoking these feelings passion, lust, pleasure,love...less I crave you evil ecastacy, child of dark desires and flesh No! I mustn't! Traiterous finger do ...

    1 min read
  • Grudges

    GrudgesMisconcepting,hateful judging,Friend I smile to your face,Stab you in your sleep,Bleed your tears till you dry,All the whole while I fake smile.Laugh, as you dust.I sympathize you with pity, th

    1 min read
  • I am

    I amBorn to turn away my eyes from deception.Cover my ears from lies and shurt my lips,rather than deprave those succeptible if I mayfail to repremand my conceptions for their ...

    1 min read
  • when i think of you

    When I think of you.When I think of you I remember your eyes.I remember the deep intellect that burnsbehind the bright hues and shades of blue that look at mewhen ...

    1 min read
  • Memory.

    I can't forget you forwith every breath I take-I breathe you in,see your eyes,hear your heart,touch your lips,taste your kiss,and think your smile.I share your tearsand laugh your humor.With every ...

    1 min read
  • My artifice

    My Friend,heed my words,lend your ears,ease your guard,so that I may take from you more than I give.Lax your eyes, butveil your heartand cover your ears to all others but ...

    1 min read
  • eye for an eye

    I'm not sure what this is. I just started writing it and it doesn't really fit anywhere else so here I go...I hate to kill the impressions brought upon the ...

    1 min read
  • Be mine (chapter 1)

    This story doesn't have a name yet. It's sort of a love romance comedy. I've decided to do something a little different with the main character. You may like it ...

    12 min read
  • Let's talk about friends.

    Let's talk about friends.There are no words that describe agood friend.There are no adjectives, no nouns--no action.For this type of thing there is no written translation--a face without a name.A ...

    1 min read
  • Regret

    Regret.You are my sorrow.I wither. I'm torn.I'm written in my disaster butI do not see myself. You are themessage beneath the curtain--Yet I will not accept you.I turn away.

    1 min read
  • Naive.
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  • If home is where the heart is, my home's with you.

    While so far awayWhat could I really say?To make it up to you.Pretend that it's warm.Pretend we have faith.Separated by blueWhat can I say?If home is my heartI should've stayedCause ...

    1 min read
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  • Passionless...

    Just another rant, something random I came up with this morning. Though I am an avid supporter of the poetic arts,I could never be a critic. Just the thought of ...

    2 min read
  • The Magician's War-Chapter 1 (Edit3ed)

    Okay! so i've taken in all of your suggestions. I've edited the first chapter and ended up changing the names a bit and i'm happier now. I believe the names ...

    9 min read
  • The magician's war (chapter one)

    i'm looking for someone who can really rip through this and junk. Tell me what's wrong with it and where I need to fix it not just conceptually but grammatical ...

    7 min read
  • The magician's war-chapter 2

    Thanks for reading! Btw if any of you have read my first chapter previously I'd like to make you aware that their have been some changes to the previous chapter. ...

    13 min read
  • Avatar the last air bender.

    yeah, you're right. Just the avatar movie made me so mad that i wanted to make my on screen play of it xD.

    1 min read
  • This is not the name of the story (chapter one)

    Chapter one If you’re reading this right now…Stop. Shut off your computer,pour the coffee in the trash, And forget you ever clicked this forum NOW before it’s too late. Okay. ...

    12 min read
  • This is not the name of the story(chapter two)

    Chapter twoBy the time I got there the rain was pouring down hard. I parked right in the God damn front—med techs and nurses looking at me and everything—and I ...

    10 min read
  • This is not the name of the story (chapter three)

    Chapter Three“Applebees?” Sean blinked. “What?”“Sean, up until a few minutes ago, I thought you were dead. And you want to meet at Applebees?” I smirked. “Dude, that’s more than a ...

    13 min read


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