Rawr'Jess

As a broken angel looks, she’ll see herself. It’s a broken mirror with a distorted figure Lying its way into her soul, she’ll listen. Running her hands down her fragile ...

Any better? As a broken angel looks, she’ll see herself. It’s a broken mirror with a distorted figure Lying its way into her soul, she’ll listen. Running her hands down ...

YaY! I be loved:D I hope you like it here :p

The only thing wrong I see with your poems is they arn't very powerful. I mean, the starting line is bland, boring, simple. It doesn't pull me in what so ...

I'm with what Eds(Whence) Said. I think that if you are going to pick such a chiched topic, at least try to make it your own. You can put more ...

Wow, sorry, but this amazes me.. Concitering this is RIGHT by my house and Willingdon is the beach I go to everyday... It's going around that she was one of ...

Ahh, velcome to this... Place, Tie.

Yay V made it over :D I love you V!! Lol.

I've read this one before, but I really like it eds, I really like the (Truth) I donno if it's needed on the last one? You more or less have ...

I don't know if anyone or anything could make Po behave.. Unless I told him I'd give him a bag of TTW... Then he just might.

Yes, I've written a few. Thanks though -.- Just no one really commented on them, so I just left to keeping it away in the dark, I'm like... 156 pages ...

My dear god, I swear Eds, have I read a few of these before? Or am I just that drugged up atm? Hmm, well.. I can try to crit some ...

Ahh, welcome Hypo :D I joind... Even though it's confuzzlin

Wow, I must say, this site is amazing. :) Another TW --Jessica..

I write Poems for the most, I have a novel on the go, and I've done short story, I'm all over with what type I write really :)