Ravenna

Writing this one was kind of funny. I got absorbed in my own writing and that has never happened before. Hmmmm.....intriguing. And I know what you mean about the heathen ...

R&R please

Armageddon No day has ever harbored so much mystery as this day, When the tides of life crash against the celestial coast. Life is no more Death is no more ...

LOL I'm trying to find it. Something went wrong with the middle part of the story, like the beginning was good but the plot was getting twisted around and even ...

I am completely in love with this poem. It's one of the most exceptional pieces of work I have layed eyes on. No criticisms, I'm sorry. Honestly, I'm gaping at ...

It's very well-written. A bit on the scary side but I'm almost positive you meant it that way. I love it. You might not want to put those things you ...

This was great! It expresses true feeling and it flowed nicely too. "if we would have spent our days lying on our backs in grassy fields making pictures in the ...

I am so angry and those Oscar people! GRRR!! I stayed up until midnight to see if Johnny Depp was going to finally win best actor. That's 2 years in ...

Sick which doesn't happen often (knock on wood): aqua Happy: cerulean Angry: grayish blue Determined: Dark dark dark blue Tired: Almost purple General: Silvery blue rimmed with black

Thanx Sam and Niteowl, and Firestarter, I never heard a poem at all similar too this so I'm not aware that I was plagiarizing or...'cliche-ing' as you may. I thought ...

dish soap!

Thanks everybody. I wrote it a while ago and just pulled it out again so now I'll edit and maybe send it somewhere (?) It's too sinister to let my ...

It could turn out to be wonderful, but it needs more length. So short a poem can't have much depth or passion, which is what people look for when they're ...

Ahem...That sent chills down my spine. Ok...critisism, critisism. I like it except for one little line. "At the end of its twirling whirl." You used "the end" on the last ...

"[Illegible word.. looks almost like 'surrender'] If I were to scream, how would it feel? If I closed my eyes and thought of you, would I die? What would I ...