RavenFeathered

I have to say, I really liked this a lot.. It flows pretty well and I liked the way you described the demon! The slight errors have already been pointed ...

This is great and yes, the only errors Nightly already pointed out. Keep at it, this is awesome and I'm hooked. :)

Mika was never one for clubs. Especially since they were filled with brain-dead drunks like the one that had been pressing for her attention for a while now. "Hey, sweetie," ...