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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: If There's No End There Can Be No Beginning (Improved)

    Don't worry about the harshness, I'd rather criticism be truthfully and honest.

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: If There's No End There Can Be No Beginning (Improved)

    Thank you so much for the review, I agree with what you said, I was rushing it so that's probably why most of the story was grammatically incorrect. Plus I ...

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    Ahhh, okay I understand why you chose it then.

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: If There's No End There Can Be No Beginning

    Oh okay, thanks for the help :-)

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Blessed

    No problem :-)

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: If There's No End There Can Be No Beginning

    Thank for the review, this is my first time doing this and I thought I wouldn't get one! I understand what you mean by keeping it modern, tbh i didn't ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Blessed

    I loved it! The tension was perfectly built up, throughout I had a feeling something was wrong with Meg but I was surprised to see she was so distraught that ...

    Mar 11, 2017


Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath