RavenAngelique

Uhhh...yea. I really didn't get it. Lack of rythm and it seems kinda...scattered

That was rather interesting It really cathches your attention Keep up the good work!

This was very well written. The message came accrosed loud and clear and I just loved it The last line really pulled it all together and packed the punch I ...

Ok so yea..I agree with most everybody else about the caps.Italics would look better. Other then that there were a few grammer and spelling errors. It was very well written ...

I must admit...rather intersting poem Caught my attention quickly However the flow of it is a little off Other then that tone down a bit and it will be lovely

Well, this is super cute! The end was really unexpected (which is good) and the parts in between really fleshed it out. Great stuff! Oh, and when you said Her ...