RavenAngelique

Uhhh...yea. I really didn't get it. Lack of rythm and it seems kinda...scattered

That was rather interesting It really cathches your attention Keep up the good work!

This was very well written. The message came accrosed loud and clear and I just loved it The last line really pulled it all together and packed the punch I ...

Ok so yea..I agree with most everybody else about the caps.Italics would look better. Other then that there were a few grammer and spelling errors. It was very well written ...

I must admit...rather intersting poem Caught my attention quickly However the flow of it is a little off Other then that tone down a bit and it will be lovely

Well, this is super cute! The end was really unexpected (which is good) and the parts in between really fleshed it out. Great stuff! Oh, and when you said Her ...

Once in a great long while, The queen awakens from her lonely slumber. This long and peaceful slumber, Causes the queen much pain. She sees blackness when she awakes. Her ...

This piece is rather powerful and I loved the rhyming .However...There was one spot where the rhyming was off just a little off. "She hums to herself as she watches ...

I liked it.Intersting and each line makes you want to read more and know more.Although I do agree,the rhyming does seem a little forced and stanzas would make is easier ...