Raven

Thank you all!! The second picture is a man's face, and it's done with pencil. Sand would be interesting. I've got to try that. The third one is just an ...

I wanted the last stanza to have a different rhythm than the others. Where's the typo?

Wow. wow. I love it. It was on the creepy side, but a little bit of crazy. It was very good. I reaklly liked the couplets. That's a very unique ...

Hello hello! Welcome. I'm not a screenwriter, but I love reading them!

....Or are you? ;)

I didn't think of that...

I'm deleteing my account, but then creating a new one under a different name- SapphireBird

I agree, but I wanted a twist in the poem. People are always talking about predictable stuff, and I wanted to write something different.

I love dark poems. I'm really morbid that way. I like this one a lot. I'm not sure of the meaning, but I don't go for meaning in a poem. ...

God talked to me today, And I could tell he wasn't pleased. He said I should just stop it all, Before I get diseased. He said I should put down ...

I don't get what everyone doesn't understand. I liekd it. It made perfect sense too me.

Despite what everyone says, I really really like this one. It's differant. As a whole, it doesn't make sense, but that's fine I like the first stanza the best. it's ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

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