Raven

It's cute. I was a bit confused though, because there's a guy who's unknown, but in the second to the last stanza, because of the questions, I felt that there ...

When the trees are thin and bare, That's when the fox sleeps in her lair Through the branches of the birch, The owl sits upon his perch Outside the blizzard ...

I like all the adjective. That's the problem that I have with my poetry. I loved it. The flow was excellent, and the imagry was amazing, though I was confused ...

This is really cute. I enjoyed it.

I like it. Short and sweet.

*gasp* Oh my gosh!! What would you do if all the chipmunks in the world lived underground?

Dear Tiptoe, You have two choices: Amputation, which is a very suscessful method, but can get costly. Or you could simply buy a pair of thick leather gloves, which probably ...

Granted, but it doesn't work, so your stuck with a broken peice of plastic and metal. I wish I didn't have an exam tomorrow

I meant bed, like she's a whore or something.

I called my boss and quit my job; The payment for my bread . Bread?

I think the focal point was very artistic, but the big blue bluberrie could be in focus, but it looks pretty the way it is.

I like how in the beginning, it's like (you?) can't wait to live; but in the end, you want to die, but you're secretly hoping someone will catch you and ...

Nice. Really nice. It's interesting and extrely unique. Is there going to be anymore?

If I cut out my heart you can have it If I capture my soul you can keep it All I ask is for my lips So I can say ...

Life is like the ocean It loves to play about Sometimes full of joy or sorrow Sometimes full of doubt Life is like the ocean Life is like the sea ...