Ratter-chan

Ok. That was absolutely hilarious! *laughs hysterically* You did a wonderful job! It started great, very eye-catching. ^-^ The imagery was very good, all of your characters were very different. ...

Wow. I read all of the parts of this story and I can't wait for the next! All of your characters have their own personalities, and your imagery is great(although ...

Wonderful story! It was written very well and I loved the imagery, especially this part: There was Saria, her smile more beautiful to me now than I could have ever ...

That was really good! Very well written, but I think you should split it into paragraphs. That would make it easier to follow. It was great overall, maybe it could ...

That was so beautifully written. It had a lot of emotion in it, sad, but good. As far as I see, there were no errors. Also, very good imagery. It ...

That was a wonderful poem! Your rhythm was great and the lines always rhymed. The best part was the end, that was hilarious. It probably would've been a little better ...