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Re: Wayward Poise
I have a few comments, but sadly I know nothing about poetry. :( I really like the pauses in the poem, it gives it a real good pace. The first ...
May 8, 2007 -
Re: Pandora's Tears - Chapter One - Demons
Okay, you obviously have a lot more experience at writing than I do, or have spent awhile polishing this before posting it. The pacing is great, I think anyway, the ...
May 7, 2007 -
Re: Speedy
This is Great! I think it could actually be made into a good short story too. Hope you write more on this. You're writing is easy to understand, and is ...
May 6, 2007 -
Re: Ghost Ship
Hey this is Great! I don't really know why there are bats on the ship, but they are an intresting idea for a new enemy. I only saw a few ...
May 4, 2007