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I would love a review on my realistic short story called My Roots: If you like what you see, lest me know because I have turned this into a novel ...

Wow thank you so much!

Thank you for the great response! I'll definitely think about that!

I am writing from a fetus' POV because my favorite type of writing is when you make inanimate things come to life. For example, I wrote a piece about the ...

Does anyone know where to search on the web for fetus development while in the womb or anything about pregnancy that I can easily find on the web? I am ...

I love the story line in its entirity. Im eager to see how this turns out because of the descriptions you will have to make using the other senses! :))

Yeah, tenses are rough to deal with Good luck with that

Oh my gosh I have the exact same problem and the two post above are completely right you have to keep re-reading your stories and look for specific tense change. ...