Rascalover

Thank you guys so much. I'll work on the corrections and put the edited version up soon.

Authors note: It is a bit short, so if you find parts where description is needed please let me know, and I do not like the title so please give ...

All done :) Who's next? :pirate3:

Hey, Thanks for the request :). I think your previous reviewers did a fine job picking out your grammar mistakes, so I won't focus on them; plus, I don't really ...

No problem, I totally love this story, and I am some what of a nit picker ahaha. :)

Hey, Here I am again! :) I love the fact that this chapter is from the boy's point of view. There were a quite bit more grammar mistakes in this ...

Hey, I love the way you use description in this chapter. I have not read chapter one and two yet, but I will after this because I liked it so ...

I'm back!!! :) Anyone need a review?

Okay, how do I say this? I got dragged into doing the school play, and I need to catch up on my school work, so i have to pause on ...

Okay, how do I say this? I got dragged into doing the school play, and I need to catch up on my school work, so i have to pause on ...

Here's the link. Thank you

anyone?

Here to review chapter :) Surprise Is this the title of the chapter? If not, it serves no purpose being here. Heather and Bri met me at the door when ...

All done. :) Who's next?

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I won't be harsh, I promise. Also, I would like to encourage you to review other peoples work as well. They work just as ...