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Re: Not all Rainbows and Perfection
Day 2: Your Affair Rain pounding down Upon our happy home It took you three years To being her into our lives And it only took her an hour To ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Wow I wasn't fully expecting that ending. This piece is very moving. Awesome job. :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Not all Rainbows and Perfection
So here goes nothing :) Day 1: Crushed She caused you Pain and destruction She killed your Hopes and dreams She scared away your Future and reality Yet you let ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
All done whos next? :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review :) I will be nit-picky about grammar and such, but don't take it personal; I just want you to have an awesome story. Now ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
All done :) Who'se next ?
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Time of Our Lies (Chapter One)
Hello and thanks for requesting a review, I will be a little nit-picky towards grammar aspects, but it's all so you can be a better write. On to the meat ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: The Buddy System Archives
NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED name: Rascal or Tiffany (no preference :) ) age: 17 what you write: I write poetry and realistic/ romantic fiction (novels) what you review: I review alot ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Well.
Hello :) Here's a happy (belated) welcome to young writers society! If you ever need a review just hit me up, and I'll be glad to give you one. I ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Letters to the Front Line
Being the daughter of a retired soldier, this hits home. I think it's a beautiful piece. There were a few places where the flow felt interrupted, but other than that ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: My Conviction
Hey guys, I'm dipping my hand in some poetry again since I just recieved my anthology book with my published poem in it. (It gave me some confidence :) ) ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
All done, who needs one right now?
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Dear Inspiration
Hello, Here as requested, and thanks for doing so :) I maybe a little nit-picky towards grammar, but that's just because, as a fellow writer, I want you to be ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
bump* Anyone need a review?
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
I'll use Eva and Max from my new novel. Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? E: My name is Eva Espero Esparza. My grandmother's name was ...
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