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Day nine: Beautiful I am no size zero My stomach isn’t flat I can’t fit into a size small My hair isn’t styled I don’t wear designer jeans My nails ...

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Hey, Thanks for requesting a review, but I don't think I can help much with this poem because I don't really know what it's about. I can't find any meaning ...

Day eight: Noise Thump. Thump. My head is pounding. Crowd. Crowd. The people keep coming. Drip. Drip. The rain comes slow. Bam. Bam. My ears drum on. Sweep. Sweep. Books ...

Day Seven: Death. Blood. Thick and heavy. It's running Through you. Drained from others To keep a still body alive Cold, blue I need you Come home to me Jesus ...

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Hello and welcome to YWS! As always I encourage you to review others work as well as post your own, and it looks like your on a good start :) ...

Hello, Here as requested :) First I will give you an in-depth review of grammar mistakes then my overall thought of the story. I opened my eyes but it wasn’t ...

Day six: We need a change Life full of candy, games, and love A child's dream Rainbows, Unicorns, and fantasy lands A childs imagination That is how childhood should be ...

bump :) Who needs a review ?

Trust. A funny Five letter word You blew mine away Like dust My world has Been held by many But by you is when is was perfect The confidence I ...

Day five: Trust Trust. A funny Five letter word You blew mine away Like dust My world has Been held by many But by you is when is was perfect ...

Author's note:This is a sensitive subject, but it's been on my heart lately. If you are for abortion than reading this may upset you. I wrote this poem for NaPoWriMo, ...

This is a sensitive subject, but one that's been on my heart lately. If you are for a abortion this may upset you (the second poem) A Loving Mother A ...

Day Three: Our Union It’s been twenty-eight long years Two hundred thousand tears Five heart breaks And one million scars Mother said you were never comin’ Daddy said he’d shoo ...