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Day: 16 Infertile: No longer will I Pass the baby section Hopeful There will be no Tiny footsteps heard in this House How do you explain To your husband that ...

Day 15: The Fast and Furious The hair of a mermaid And eyes of seaweed Her laughter filled the room Her beauty silencing everyone She dance the night away On ...

Day 14: Who said: Who said that Tears had to be sad Who said that Rain falls only in bad times Who said that Fire was angry Tears are graceful ...

Day 13: No Words Today Blank space Empty verses Words not there You do that To me A person who Fills their days Writing trillions of words But when you’re ...

bump :) Anyone needin' a review? :pirate3:

Day 12: Voicebox: You capture me In every note Melodies locked in With a voice from the heavens Angels would strike each other, leaving gashes For a voice As sweet ...

Day 11: May 31st Tiny hands Long laughs The memories Are flooding back We were all just children Not too long ago Pushing through obstacles Obtaining accomplishments We are adults ...

All done who's next?

Hey. Thanks for requesting a review :) I will start out with the nit-picks of grammar then give you an overall impression of what I thought of your piece. Now ...

All done who's next? :)

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review :) Now, I am not a fan of fantasy works, and I do say that I don't review fantasy in my thread, but because ...

Day ten: Kissing the stars Sweat glistens along Your forehead Grunts and strains come from My mouth Feet and hands Are in perfect unison Your beautiful hair Swishes in the ...

Hey, Thank you for requesting a review :) My only nit-pick is this: The Sun crumbles down, with the chaos of day It should be the chaos of the day ...

Hey, Here I am again; I enjoyed your story line, so I'm back to review chapter two. Here's the meat of your review: I stare at my older sister, Lina. ...

Hello, I'm happy to be one of your firs reviewers :) i will be nit-picky about grammar and such things; then, I will give you an overall opinion. On to ...