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Stronger than a hurricane Our teenage angst Brings us pain Raging within ourselves No one understands No one cares Where they see no problems They see no pain But our ...

Day 23: Angst: Stronger than a hurricane Our teenage angst Brings us pain Raging within ourselves No one understands No one cares Where they see no problems They see no ...

Day 22: Torn Apart: Vivid as a summer day Sweet as July rain A kiss of vibrant shocks Feelings blooming in every which way Soft as rose petals in the ...

Day 21: Scared: Afraid of the dark Age six Afraid of school Age twelve Afraid of driving Age sixteen Afraid of leaving Age eighteen Spend your whole life Wishing to ...

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Hey, I noticed you are kind pf new to YWS, so I just want to encourage you to go out and review other people's work. Now because I haven't read ...

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I pray the world Your soul to keep A perfect beauty You came out of me Yet, I cannot have you No cries or gurgles You’re blue Eyes rolled to ...

Day 20: Crash: A swig of a bottle A swerve of a lane The beep of a horn The cry of an infant That’s when everything Changed No more late ...

Day 19: Memories: A precious moment Significant Frozen in time Still like photograph Memories For generations to see Time just stops For Milliseconds you see I’ll remember You As the ...

Day 18: A Mother's Wound: I pray the world Your soul to keep A perfect beauty You came out of me Yet, I cannot have you No cries or gurgles ...

Day 17: The moment I knew: Knees trembling Like a kite in the wind Heart pounding Like a jackhammer Hands cold Like her nose in the winter Mind racing Like ...

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Hey. I am sorry that this is so late, but here I am as requested. First I will nit-pick grammatical errors then I will give you an overall view of ...