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Re: Winterland.
Hey, Sorry it took me a while to get to this, but thank you for requesting a review! Wow, it looks like you have alot of good reviews here; I'll ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
bump :)
May 4, 2011 -
Re: 7 Ways of Looking at a Saguaro
Hey, I like the idea of this, but at times I felt like none of the stanzas were talking about the same thing; were they suppose to be connected? Also, ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Belladonna
Hey, Welcome to YWS! During my review I nit-pick on grammar, so if I seem I am being harsh don't be afraid it's only in love. I also want to ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Shadows
Hey, I noticed you were new to YWS, and I just wanted to wish you good luck with your future writing and encouragment to review other's writing as well. my ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Alternative Ending to "The Lady or the Tiger?"
Hey, I had to do this same assignment a few years ago :) I noticed you were fairly new to YWS, so I also want to encourage you to keep ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Not all Rainbows and Perfection
Day 26: Don't be: So scary A whole new life Awaits to be explored Childhood has since left you Everything will change People and places will cease to exists Don’t ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Not all Rainbows and Perfection
Day 25 The pen is mightier than the sword: A new pen Crisp as a fall day Smells uniquely inky Craving for a hand To put it to paper For ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Not all Rainbows and Perfection
Day 24: Nursing: N ot sure if this is what I want A job for money can silence my head, but not my heart U nion university is my school ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
All done who's next? :)
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Paint (Chapter 1)
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I noticed you are fairly new to YWS, so I just wanted to encourage you to keep reviewing other peoples work and posting your ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: March Hare, November Wolf (2)
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I am more than a little confused. I didn't really understand what was going on, and even when I went back to chapter one ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: The Price
Hey, Your poems are so awesome, never stop writing! The imagery is so dark and perfect for the topic. I love how I can feel the hurt and pain from ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Betrayal
Hey, Here I am again :) Yay for description and imagery! That's the thing I really like about your poems. You have alot of really helpful and awesome reviews, so ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Lucifer
Hey, Sorry I am so late with your request, but I was out visiting universities :) Any who I am back, and I really liked this poem. It paints a ...
Apr 29, 2011
