Rascalover

Thank you so much for answering but it's fixed now :) sorry for wasting anyones time...

Focus mostly on the flower please :)

Hello, Here to review :) All in all this is a pretty strong piece; the flow is a little rocky, but other than that I really liked this poem. I ...

Hello, Here to review; let's start with grammatical errors if there are any. *Writing style* I don't like the repitition of its in this first paragraph. Since the baby is ...

Thanks for your honesty. :) I love couplets.

You asked me to review this, but I don't see anything that I would fix. :) I love the way you made it flow and rthyme. The only thing I ...

I am not new, but I need help. It says I have a review on my poem, but when I click on my poem nothing comes up and it says ...

Pent up anger over my brother basically moving back in with us because he spends his money faster than he can earn it, than calling me lazy and saying I ...

Never meant to find the beauty Hidden beneath scars and nightmares Deep like February’s snow Running, running My mind always looking for tomorrow And the next day, and the next ...

Hello, Here I am to review. Mostly I will comment on grammatical errors. :) I had never once thought of encountering the feeling of nothingness. Never once felt the angst ...

Hello, Pretty happy to be your first reviewer :) I really loved the concept of this very orginal and unique. There was one thing that struck as not fitting: repeating ...

All done. Who else needs a review?! :smt003

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review; I am finally here! this will be the shortest review ever, unfortunately. I loved this poem, and I really see no which way that ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review; I am finally here! For one thing, when I first looked at it all I saw was a big block of text, and honestly, ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review. I am finally here! I know my punctuation(timely manner) sucks, but now that I am here I will give you a hopefully nonredundant, detailed ...