Rascalover

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! Going back to Southwest Middle School after the summer break is an easy task to handle for Lauren Pitt. Maybe try to reword this ...

Review my short story please

Can you review my short story please?

Can you review my short story please?

Can you review my short story please?

Tears cascaded down her face as she tossed and turned. Her long, golden hair whipping around her shoulders, splashed across her sleeping husband’s face. Rubbing the crust from his eyes, ...

Any more reviews on this would be so appreciated!

Your welcome! Who else needs a review? Stack 'em up!

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I am, by no means naïve, nor am I in denial. There should be a comma after means because by no means is a ...

all done :D Who needs a review next?

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! There were a lot of grammar mistakes in this, but I kind of get the feeling that you threw this together really fast and ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! And there was me, standing on the side, head tilted, watching my family mourn my dead body. Never start a sentence with a conjunction ...

It wont let me click on your link for your poem :( Send another and I will definitely look at it. For now who else needs a review?! :D

My skin may be fair, But that’s no adjective to describe life Brokenness and bitterness Dwelling within me, it’ll never leave I have to deal with it, Live with it ...

all done, who's next? :pirate3: