Randomwriter

Hello, I still like the story very much. Its very good. While reading I noticed some spots with comma issues, but maybe I'm just off. I could be wrong. Anyway, ...

Hello, Lol i love this poem. Its so cute and imaginative. I could honestly picture a moment like a little kid playing in the tube or pool or something and ...

hello, What an interesting story. i really like it, but I've only read chapter three so now i have to find the other two and read them too. i love ...

hello, I would like to say first off very interesting. I like the plot so far murder mystery and disappearance. So the story drags in peoples curiosity. I didn't really ...

hello, I would like to say what a great piece of writing you have. I see true feeling and heart. It was beautiful. Beautiful writing. Hope to see more of ...

hello, I would say you have a lot to say in this poem. In a way its kind of chaotic. Maybe showing life is truly crazy. I understand that lol. ...