RamonGalvez

Dearest PhlebasThePhoenician, I updated chapter 1. I tried to take on your feedback because it was very high quality. I would be honored to the maximum if you came back ...

thank you so much for this review it really hit me deep in a way i didnt expect reading your words felt like someone actually saw the messy little world ...

You're very welcome! I like doing what you are because I end up fleshing out the world that im building. Looking forward to more of your work!

Thank you so much for the encouraging words. Thanks for pointing that last bit out. Yeah it does seem out of place, huh? Thanks for the compliments as well. I'll ...

I really like your feedback. Super professional plus aesthetically pleasing. More importantly, it really drove to the heart of the matter with actionable advice that I wager would work, if ...

I tried to do in-line critique mode, putting my feedback in braces: Long, spindly striped arm Reaching from a hidey-hole in my wall Sweet raspberry tart in ebony claw An ...

You%u2019re killing it. You got something awesome here.

Sorry idk how it sent twice like this. Umm yes. Shaking her could be good. Could be weird. I imagine that this monster is way bigger than the girl, so ...

I didn't know fluff was a genre. I really like fluff as a genre. I like the pleasant, feel-good works. “Technically yes, but don’t you dare try.” I love it. ...

Okie thanks for your guidance. Lemme know if I effed up. Also, any advice for, um, it seems like, when you copy your text from the original doc and paste ...

Thank you so much! Let me see if I understand this rule correctly. BRB.