Raindeer

Hey Lib!! Thanks so much for the review! It%u2019s so good to hear your thoughts. :)

Yes! It reads much better now that it's part of the same paragraph.

Thank you so much for your review!! I definitely agree with your comments and I will be trying to hone in on the show-don%u2019t-tell. :) Thank you again!

Thank you! I am really glad to hear your thoughts about Lila%u2019s mother%u2019s reaction because that was one of the things I was really struggling with when writing this chapter ...

Thanks so much for your comments Icy!

Great chapter, Lib! No review today - just leaving a little comment, because I'm so behind!! I'm really happy that we're seeing Audrey and Will practice magic. I've said this ...

Ohhh, I see! Yeah, I understood him only falling in love with humans (interesting, btw), I guess I just didn't catch it being super sudden. Thanks for explaining hehe :)

Hey there, not a review, just a little comment! I really loved this poem. I like how it's not only a poem but an experience - we're living through the ...

Woohoo :D

Thanks so much for your review! And welcome to YWS :D Yeah, the dialogue thing was a choice but I'm realizing how hard it is to read (someone else commented ...

Thank you so much for your review!:)

Thank you so much!! I am really really glad you got the genuine and authentic vibe from the story :)

hey!! Thanks so much for this review. I appreciate your thoughts! I am going to go back and do some grammar editing, thanks for pointing those little errors out :)

Thank you so much for your review!! I really appreciate your interpretations of the characters (spot on) and all your thoughts. And oops, yes, that was a typo haha. It ...

Aw thank you so much!